Jake+Fitzgerald


 * WRITING PORT FOLIO ASSESMENT TASK**
 * I am so impressed with the sophistication and originality of your work! Congratulations!**





Feedback: Punchy and effective.
 * Week 1: Micro-stories**

Feedback: Sophisticated extended metaphor!!! Excellent variation of sentence structure and paragraphing. Well done! 88%
 * Week 2: NAPLAN practice paper**


 * Week 3: N/A**


 * Week 4: Poem**

See comments. Really enjoyed this. Very evocative! 10/10 Paragraphing was a real issue. There were some clever images but the ending is too cliched. Not your usual brilliance! 80%
 * Week 5: Discovery opening and closing paragraphs**
 * Week 6: Interesting person**
 * The Box: Practice Naplan Task**


 * Ender's Game Questions**