James+Wiseman

50 word micro-story: A stormy sky was closing in on my body and mind, filling my brain with a daunting thought of giving up. I was lost without a soul in sight. A distant guardian light caught my sight and a godly soul was striving to point out an optimistic approach to my situation. Feedback: Check spelling! Very effective opening with the evocative metaphor. Rethink the adjective 'optimistic'.