Alex+Chandler

Powerful use of the extended metaphor. See comments. 9/10 Great work**__**! **__
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Thorough and insightful responses. I don't completely agree with your last response. He did see, he did act and he did conquer. Unfortunatetly, your final perceptive comment re: xenocide is correct. 10/10

Multimedia text uses effective images and the story is sound but a tad brief. 8/10

__**Alex Chandler

12 Word Story**__ One person falls over. Everyone keeps on walking. This is our world.

Feedback: Meaning conveyed with precision. Well done!

“Stop,” an old lady said as a ball shot onto a road. Young Johnny slid to a halt as a bus hit his football squashing it flat. Johnny spun round to thank his saviour. “I forgot – walk, don’t run.” His granny, run down crossing a highway was smiling at him. Feedback: Clever use of sibilance!
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